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"The Future's Past"


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Posted by Highlander on March 24, 1997 at 10:38:08:

When you read my Revision of "The Future's Past"
by the way it is up now....I screwed up and forgot
to change a part so keep in mind......

in the second scene.....Odo, Dax, and Worf are on
the bridge of the Defiant. Odo says: There doesn't seem
to be any signs of anyone trying to board the ship.

well he is supposed to say ( In the Revision):
There are several phaser burns on the Bulk heads,
someone tried to board the ship......so please remember this
when reading the revision, other wise the second act makes no
since.........so check out the Revision, I think you'll
like it this time.



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