Well...Posted by Mike Wright on January 04, 1998 at 17:32:25: In Reply to: To Mike Wright posted by Me on January 04, 1998 at 17:23:58: It was a lot of dialogue with no detail. :) How old are you? How long have you been writing? Cause this is actually common with first time writers. You just have to concentrate on detail is all.. As for the Starfleet Marine corp, I don't even think it exists... It would just be redundant I think. But check out the USS Renegade, that is a marine ship.
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