I did not notice that...Posted by Sheerin on January 07, 1998 at 19:55:51: In Reply to: Well.... posted by IFLAP on January 07, 1998 at 19:08:13: I would like to beleive that my writing is ok, I like yours, but one thing is, you do not pay attention to detail. (i have only read the first one) Like you do not describe the Room where the character are.
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