Tell me what you think of this...
Posted by: Kyle1701 on February 04, 1998 at 19:36:58 Burke turned his head "They've made their decision?" She nodded her head "Before we go in, I want you to know that It's been an honor serving with you." Burke smiled, Kim had always been serious about honor, he had found it interesting that both the host and the simbyont (sp) had common interests. "Thanks Kim, I needed that." Burke and Kim then exited the room and walked into a court room. They sat down at a long table. An admiral picked up a bell and rang it. "Captain Burke, stand please." burke did as he was told, his face was expressionless, he wasn't sure if he was ready for the results of the inquiry. The admiral continued, "Captain John Burke, the court has ruled in the following charges. One- For disobeying Starfleets orders, Guilty. Two- For entering Cardassian/Dominion Territory, Guilty. Three- For putting the U.S.S. Fresno and her crew in unecessary danger, Guilty." The list went on for a while longer. After the sixteenth charge was read the Admiral looked into Burke's eyes. "Captain Burke, as of this moment, you are stripped of your rank and command..." This is basically a new series that I'm going to launch on my webpage... (It takes place in an alternate universe, not the same universe as ST: Enterprise, but another alternate universe...) (This time I'm going to go for a crew that I made up myself, instead of using a crew that was already alive.) I'm giong to try to do two series at a time, ST: Enterprise and this new one... (Not sure what I'm going to call it...) But what do you think of it so far? (The main characters are going to be introduced later in the story, once it's written.)
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